The story was a bit slow and I wanted the beginning to take off more. I wanted to see Leo and Odette developed more at the first part of the book. I wanted to see the transition from their home to the new home in Edaion. The book got more into the characters as the book went along. It also helped fill in some blanks from the other book Ana. I personally like this book a bit better then the other and I know some of you will like both if not one over the other. Overall for both books the authors did a good job and I did enjoy the stories I would like to read more by them both.